pitch reflection

I think our team did alright in terms of getting our points across through each slide however some of us would of been better off without reading off paper or the board and us all being a little more fluent in getting our ideas across. The powerpoint however did not contain enough images to even barely convince the audience as well as convey a clear enough meaning which made the audience understand our product better. The images used contained other branding's of other chocolate and wasn't concise enough throughout the powerpoint therefore at some point the audience didn't even know what our product looked like.

On our first slide initial research our slide did not contain enough information and was pretty much plain yet we were reading off the board however we managed to get our own points across.

On our idea's slide we decided to split it so that each individual can introduce their own ideas and we did that pretty well.

Throughout the slides this process repeats, being the ratio off things that can be improved on over the things we've done and implemented. A major concern or things we were lacking again was the images and the content of the slides, with this it would of much helped us in terms of getting stronger points across and showing some promise, the slide was in fact done by Paris however we all bare the burden of entrusting her to do it without giving feedback before the pre-pitch.

Moving on, on our slide about product placement which i did, i decided to make our product advertise on children and entertainment channels such as CBBC, E4, channel 4, and around the time of 3pm to 4.30pm during this time children come home from school and most of the programmes that are on are children based such as cartoons and generally speaking an ideal setting would be the TV occupied by children and parents cooking in the kitchen therefore at this time the cost to advertise will be much less than of peak times. However what stirred a confusion is what the slide showed in comparison to what i said, for example the slide shows timings on 1pm to 3pm of advertising which contradicted what I've mentioned.

We referred to our target audience a lot in our slides being children aged 7-16 and i believe that we got this across quite well. However our downfall again was the slide showing otherwise which caused confusion amongst the audiences, on our market research slide, animation and cartoon was shown and the person of the slide didn't expand on why it was on the page.

The content for Ethos was filled and gave the audience an general idea however Marcelo read off all the bits off paper and didn't not interact with the audience at all which made it seem very stiff.