small group pitch evaluation

I answered the questions in detail and expanding on each sub category i'll be talking about and i proposed what the main chunk of my documentary will be about. In the pitch i explained why i wanted to talk about sleep because it effects me and it can effect everyone at one point and i would like to inform people that it vital and shouldn't be taken lightly.

I like to contact more sleep clinics to conduct interviews and such. Visiting a sleep house/sleep chamber is a good idea but it is not something anyone can access therefore it may be limited.

However as a back up plan interviewing someone who has an medical degree and experience regarding this subject is also a good choice. For the other person ill be interviewing is one friend of mine that has experienced sleeping problems and how it has affected his life. 

In the pitch i mentioned different sleep sleeping disorders, for this to be reliable i will find statistics regarding each disorder such as Sleep apnea and conducting a graph on which age group and percentage of people will be effected.  

In the pitch i also mentioned different things that will take up the documentary apart from just interviews for example, Stages of sleep, i'll be talking about the cycle through stages 1 to REM sleep and provide graphs showing brain activity.